-Updated-My new OC-Tori

This is my OC for an OCT I want to enter.
History-When she was 11 she was with her brother on a feild trip. The bus broke down, they were stranded. Teachers worked on the bus because the bus driver dissapeared. The rest of the students went to a near by town for help while Tori and her brother, Chris, looked out for help.
They waited until the full moon was up. A monster came and attacked them, killing Chris, but only scratching and biting Tori. The men from the town near by had come and scared off the beast with a gun.
Tori awoke in a hospital and was visited by Chris-ghost.
After about a month of resting and getting stronger her friend Sam picked her up from the hospital.
But after only walking a few blocks away from the hospital, Sam was kidnapped by some guy.
Tori ran after the van Sam was in until nightfall. That night was a full moon. Tori found her friend in a shack in an old amusment park.
The man injured Sam with a gun, fatally. Tori the transformed killing the man.
Sam later died in a hospital.